All know the story of Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden, of how the Deceiver tricked Eve into eating the fruit from the forbidden tree, and Adam with her, dooming humanity to a lifetime of wickedness.
But few know that this story is incomplete – a millennia-spanning ruse perpetuated by the Church to conceal the true debauched tale of humanity’s origins.
What follows is the true story of how God’s plan for a chaste and sexless creation was foiled by the Deceiver, how the Mother and Father of humanity were transformed into the progenitors of all mankind.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.67
hot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
HOT! I loved the mental corruption during the BE
please write more!
Scarlett
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I've been reading BE stories for the better part of 25 years, and let me tell you I've rarely come across one as hot as this.
Well done, but could use some typo hunting, wastewaist etc.
Your Nickname
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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