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The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. Pride and spite, a terrible combination today's guest has in spades. Sprinkle in jealousy and you have a perfect recipe for my type chaos, as she learns perhaps it isn't what it's cracked up to be being on top.
Average Scores:

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Not particularly original or interesting. The writer fails to maintain a level of interest until the end where it stops maybe too abruptly.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed it! Ill echo requests for an epilogue
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
At first glance it seems like a typical monkey paw story but it really isn't. The Madam is particularly cruel for ruining a girl's life for the great crime of asking for a job application. I guess the Jill isn't supposed to be a sympathetic character because she was mean to her roommate that one time.

Expansion via implants is criminally underused so the story can be appreciated for that alone. The size descriptions are poor but serviceable. And the story ends abruptly with an unearned proverbial  maniacal laugh.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Definitely hit all my buttons for sure
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Not bad, but it ends right when it starts to get good.
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fantastic, my favorite of yours so far!
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I'm not big on the Madam Materia stories she's a jerk,and sometimes her customers are, too. I like happy endings. That said, this is a wellwritten story, and while the outcome was clear from MM's words, it still held my interest. I was hoping for an ending with an idea from a story I read long ago she enters it room with another woman who's acquired the same capability, so they make each other grow without limit.


Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great and fun story with strong detail towards the main characters struggles.  Definitely my new favorite!  
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
i like it. would have liked to read how she ended up rearranging her life and having to earn her money as a breast model.

Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
It was... uh, interesting...
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