A normal Thanksgiving dinner turns into more than a couple planned for when a mother's recipe is packed with estrogen.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 4.75
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.50
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The gag in the last sentence of the dialogue was a bit odd and unexpected, but aside from that, I thoroughly enjoy it.
The One And Only
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I feel like this story lacks the charm I see in your other older stories, however it is still well written and fun to read as always!
DocErotique
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I've been reading our communities special form of erotica for 20 years. I'm a connoisseur at this point. You have something here that is nothing short of true erotica. Not smut but sexual literacy on a level not often achieved.
Your command of language on the detailed level is beyond impressive. It's a genuine stand out. I never felt like I was reading smut but rather a story that had erotic elements. Even your erotic moments maintained character development pun intended and pacing. You. Ever deviated from clean writing and solid storytelling.
I have never enjoyed something so much before and, so I say, truly thank you. I voraciously await your next story.
It was good
Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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