A Madam Materia commission. Jake and Lene have a perfect relationship, but a new drug trial will put their love to the test. Will Jake find a solution, or be left behind as Lene grows further and further beyond his capability.
It was decent and a good read at first the BE scenes devolve into she's outgrowing her clothes. While hot doesn't go anywhere while I am not a big fan of cuckolding the ending seemed to come out of nowhere and I feel there was a lot more potential in this. The Villain at the end being the mom was a major asspull, and just overall felt like a very low effort on everything but the cuckolding scenes. Feel bad for the main char he gets basically forced into a nowin situation by his own mom of all things
Really, the lack of BE wouldn't be so bad, because the overall hourglass growth is really hot to me. I like butt expansion. The whole mom is an evil scientist just comes totally out of nowhere, no buildup. almost zero proper foreshadowing, and it goes from 1 to 11 right away. Suddenly we're taking over the world with drugs in a way that barely makes sense. That's the worst part, there's no warning that the story will do this stuff. The story gets depressing by the end and it's like the bad ending to a game and now I just want the good ending. Lene and Jake's character development goes the wrong direction the whole time and I just feel bad for both of them now mostly Jake, poor guy. It's porn, for actual fuck's sake. Jake should totally find a drug to make his dick huge and rail his hot girlfriend. THAT is the kind of absurdity I would actually enjoy in a smut piece. Or he could just do with what he has, I've never heard of fat making it actually impossible to fuck a girl. Something just doesn't add up. I'm imagining the positions they could have tried and he could DEFINITELY have gotten in there. Instead Jake is a boneless loser and gets superultramega cucked. Everone in the planet with a bigger dick has their way with his superenhanced wife. There should be a big, fat, Lena'sasssized warning on this story that it's about cuckolding. Maybe it would at least appeal to people who are into that fetish, and it wouldn't blindside those of us who don't like reading about cucks. So much for the girl championing feminism, the whole world got turned into a feminist's worst nightmare. Ugh.
overall bad
As others have noted, this story takes a wild ride in terms of tone. Technically great, barring a few misspellings. The story started so well and upbeat that when the tone started to dip, I still had hope for the ending, but instead it actually made me feel really depressed. Then the actual ending hit out of nowhere and kinda sank the whole ship. I could only recommend this with the warning to not get attached to what starts as a pretty lovely little textbook romance, but just kinda devolves itself into 100 cuckoldry. Again, there isn't anything wrong with that, especially given this was a commission, but it was so disappointing thinking things were going to turn out less sad.
story started nice and just kept going downhill
How can you have a story with this much sex on OFB and not include a single titjob? Sheesh. The Villain at the end felt like a major asspull, and just overall felt like very low effort on everything but the cockolding scenes.
Wow imagine people not liking cuck fetishes on a website. Who would have thought. Imagine people leaving reviews based on what they thought. can't have that shit. Only good vibes and positive reinforcement allowed and any who disagree can gtfo. Seriously though, whining about people lavfing bad reviews is pathetic and, dare I say, cringe. Too much cuck, not enough be, writing was solid as most MM stories are. Felt like BE was just edited in to be able to add it to OB rather than it being the primary focus of the story.
I know this was a commission, but I think it really could have been something great if it wasn't a cuck story. The story was wrongly tagged with MPG which was disappointing. I was hoping that the MC would grow his own giant dick and would triumphantly come home one day and be able to fuck his girl but sadly that never happened. I guess I should have known when the guy was into the cucking. The BE was a little sparse as others have said, but when it was mentioned I did really like it. I always like hearing how the girl in these stories is constantly outgrowing her clothes. If cuck stuff is your thing this is probably really good, but I for one am unsatisfied.
Waow dont a surprise a lot of authors stop to post stories here. We all know madam matheria is into cuck stories, that s not really my stuff too. But damn, 1 and scream like that ?! Stop being such whining angry pussies.
Jesus, yall stop bitching. Yes, its got heavy cuck elements to it but that doesnt mean it doesnt belong, as there is definitely BE in there too.. And its an untagged cuck story cuz there is no tag for cuck... get over it. That said, the BE element was severely lacking in terms of detail. I think it wouldve made a lot of people enjoy the story more if there had been more description of the growth, sizes, etc, and overall just more of the story spent on that subject.
This is the BEA NOT Cuckolds Unlimited. Get this garbage outta here. Slapping in token BE for something that's not a BE story is bullshit and just you shilling for commissions.
Just no.
Guys it was a commission and has BE elements. It has as much as a place as most of the stories posted here. That said, I'm not a big fan of cuck stories myself but Madame delivered in quality anyways.
Untagged NTRCuck story. BEAE was brushed over in the best of cases the girl needing new clothes regularly and outright forgotten about at the worst. The cuck aspect slowly starts to takes over about 13 of the way in. Does not belong here on a BE website.
Turned me on but I would also like to see some non cuck stories from the madame!
While Materia's stories have always been a Monkey's paw type, but the last couple have just been straight up cuck style. Not sure if they were commissioned or this is where Materia's stories are headed now, but it feels like a waste of talent. The character development was actually decent, but there's never any real payoff for the main character again, and it's about smashing the patriarchy again. Not really interested in that TBH. I'd love to see the writing skills turned to more about the transformation, exploring that, and the ramifications of it, not some weird form of revenge that isn't even sexy.
Last review was spot on. There's not much BE, and the overall premise was rather depressing and a bit racist as well. Honestly, I've seen normally endowed guys fuck massive SSBBWs on film, so the whole foundation of the story is pretty suspect.
Characters were alright. Everything else was pretty mediocre, especially the general lack of actual BE content. Like its there, but it's more an after thought.