Something I've been working on for the past week.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 2.50
- Technical: 5.00
Kanodin
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Not really enjoying the selfcontrolled nature of the growth. In my view it is the cause of anon's mixed review. The character description at the outset is fairly long. I recommend that you divide that text backstory into chunks and then distribute those pieces into the growth progression that gives us the erotics we want. Try starting the story at the point she gets shocked, insert those expository passages, and get rid of her selfcontrol.
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
The writing style was fine and readable, although this is the perfect example of the sort of story that I dislike in terms of character development Likeable character, good backstory, plausible scenario... then bad shit happens and she goes from regular human to I want the biggest tits in the world for zero apparent reasons.
I understand its smut, but at the same time I feel like having every woman be boobobssessed when she grows destroys any realism or story you craft before that point.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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