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The Overflowing Bra

Harvest Milk
A girl prepares to accept her weighty responsibility as the milk maiden of a small village. With it comes the burden of providing a plentiful harvest and fulfilling her milky duties as the Harvest Spirit's vessel.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
I get that the ending was a gag, but I didn't prefer it. Otherwise, loved it.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Professionally written based on a simple premise. I wanted 10 more detail on the growth and more comparisons to the prior harvest maiden.
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really strong story. Enjoyed it greatly!
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
SUCH a cute little story! The really hypersized breasts aren't really my thing, but I adored everything else about it. Besides that, it wasn't as if she ended up immobilizingly huge forever, so it turns out to be one of the best stories I think I've read here.
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