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In the far future, the sister of a jilted boyfriend gets revenge on the hussy who ruined her brother.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
banditkings
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
when you started using nanotech in your story any size is possable. i do like the endless orgasm as revenge. i might be a little more sadistic.
Chaos-Master
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
8/20/2010 WOW, now THAT was imaginative beyond words!! Like you warned, it was a little dark but Shawn did deserve SOME payback, plus it will affect her father.I for one appreciate the warning about the tone, so to speak, of the story. Keep up the good work!!
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