Candace has always lived in the shadow of her hotter, more outgoing twin sister and the comparison bothers her more than ever now that they're sharing a flat while attending Uni. When Candace discovers a genie in a bottle, her wish that her sister wasn't the biggest bimbo in the school doesn't come true in the way she expects.
This is the complete novel including all five parts plus the epilogue, though without the art commissioned to go along with the story.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.27
- BE: 4.18
- Characters: 4.36
- Technical: 4.27
KhorneFlakes
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What can i say ... great story, loveable characters, im eagerly waiting for more!
Modan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Wholesome story, i really liked it. I hope you can brew up a continuation
Browser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Zoe
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
So glad to see the full version of this, I've only finished part 2 but looking forward to the rest!
fred
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A fair number of typos, but otherwise well written. Decently developed characters and an interesting take on the genie trope as well.
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, and I was able to get myself off a few times, but it's too long to use just as wank material. I found myself skimming to get to the next bit of transformation.
Bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
We need more content like this on the site. Loved it!
Steve
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A legit novel with heavy BE sprinkled throughout. So few stories even try to make you really care. This one really did it for me!
hungryhobo
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
The premise of the story is good, and what part of eroticism I do see is written well, but I feel that this should be a case where less is more. so many paragraphs have talking, or conversations that seem to drag or don't move the plot along. If you had to decide whether you need to use 3 sentences to express an idea before moving on or 6, go with 3. I mean we all come here to read these stories for one purpose, sometimes taking too long or making the expansion or erotic bits few and far between makes me uninterested in its development.
FrigOfFury
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Whoops! I see A problem, the it might not be THE problem. I'll try sending a new version to the webmaster to hopefully fix it. Thank you for letting me know!
Madam Materia
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
900 KB of corrupted or damaged, in a file path four deep for some reason?
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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