The newly-formed Omega Team makes its first expedition! Along the way, they meet a new face and pack on some more weight in all the right places. Afterwards, a pair gets a bit ambitious off-duty, and meets another character who might have some interesting ties to their group.
Included in the .zip is a barely-edited version of the first part, as well.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Hmm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great job ! Im eagerly waiting for the next part
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
There were a few small grammarspelling issues, but in something this long it's still a 5 in my book. I am really into this series and hoping to see more in the future. Thanks for writing!
GrowthAddicted
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Make a Patreon! We will pay to get more, faster out of you, just like how Jessie and Angela are trying to get more, faster from the studs!
BiggerIsBest
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I have been eagerly awaiting this continuation, and you dont disappoint!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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