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The Overflowing Bra

The hacker
If reality is just a simulation, what if someone created a program to alter it? And then, what if there was a hacker around? This is Mallory's story.
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A reader
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Beyond disappointed how the story cut just before the best part...
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story, loved the girl getting drunk on her love of tits alongside others. Appreciated the little twist at the end. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I was quite amused by your story. The ending was a nice touch.
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
One of your best. The dark turn at the end was excellent. 
Roid Abuser
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I enjoyed this, and think the concept is awesome.  Reminds me a bit of The Magicians and the concept that magicians are merely hackers of a reality written by someone else.

The nerd in me kept thinking about how computer programs wouldn't have an interface that would understand things like make me beautiful.  To whom?  The commands would have to be much more specific.

I very much enjoyed the twist about the accidental download.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I do wish there was some information or glimpse into the world she created.
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