Kate really needs this crummy library job. How will the Ring of Expectations help her? And how MUCH will it help? (All previous disclaimers still apply.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.83
- Technical: 4.17
Blake89
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
So hot! I know it's been 4 years but I'm delighted to see the continuation of this saga!
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Absolutely fantastic and I cannot wait for part two! I really hope Kate stays kind and good even in spite of her new confidence and position... And that a few male characters show not everyone with a Ychromosome is a tyrant or a lech.
one800doctorb
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very hot. I especially liked that Maxine got even more of a boost after her initial transformation.
Daelon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is the great start to a story. I hope it continues. I've seen much worse grammar from native speakers. You're doing well.
Guest
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Yo this was good as hell. Keep it up!
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Really enjoyed the setup you got going here, definitely keen for more!
Technically a few grammatical mistakes, but as you say in your disclaimer, it's not your first language, and the story is more than enough to make up for it hence the 5 rating!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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