A simple story about a woman who wishes for bigger tits to win her husband's love, and gets a little more than she bargained for.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.80
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story! like how you bring lactation in then make her like it. Great job, keep writing. 4 in BE description is at the beg of story. Then they grow by sex.
RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I quite enjoyed this short tale. Amusing and humorous.
wildcard
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A very enjoyable read, even though I'm usually very picky about short stories and often there lack of fully fleshed out characters and descriptions of events along with the rapid progress of events.
Surprisingly I wasn't overly bothered by it. It's your writing style that appeals to me, what makes this short story an enjoyable read.
Kanodin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love your sense of humor and pace.
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A perfect slice of breast expansion. Wellwritten, good descriptions, a nice little arc, and a lovely finish.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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