The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Practical Magic
A simple story about a woman who wishes for bigger tits to win her husband's love, and gets a little more than she bargained for.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story!  like how you bring lactation in then make her like it. Great job, keep writing. 4 in BE description is at the beg of story. Then they grow by sex. 
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I quite enjoyed this short tale. Amusing and humorous.
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
A very enjoyable read, even though I'm usually very picky about short stories and often there lack of fully fleshed out characters and descriptions of events along with the rapid progress of events. 

Surprisingly I wasn't overly bothered by it. It's your writing style that appeals to me, what makes this short story an enjoyable read.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I love your sense of humor and pace.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A perfect slice of breast expansion. Wellwritten, good descriptions, a nice little arc, and a lovely finish.
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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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