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The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
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Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. A star is something beautiful to see, as our little customer can attest with his star-struck infatuation. Will it turn out to be a blessing however, or a curse to be so taken by perfection?
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great stuff as always. I never comment on your uploads but always look forward to new ones! Thank you!
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I thought this was really great. Thank you for always giving us high quality stories.
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