A little adult magic is always fun! But what happens when a milky trick hangs around longer than it should?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I like original stories like this one! Very good, keep it up! IMO you should work out a more satisfying ending though. That is uless your already at work on P2BA ch 2.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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