The Overflowing Bra

Once again, I had a very nice time reading this. Hence I rate this on five for maximum overall enjoyment.

This chapter didn't contain any BE spoiler perhaps some very short implied for Ms. Keane, so you only get three stars for the description of big boobs. I'd love to see you up he quantity of breastcentric themes a bit, and explore this topic more in a showing style than purely stating facts.

You're still introducing new characters in separate paragraphs and I like that a lot, assuming that every one of them is going to play a role in the story you want to tell. I like how they are elaborated, and can't wait to see how they all come into play.

I feel the number of spelling mistakes has been reduced, but still there are some phonetic mixups. Your vocabulary is excellent, even on the fancy side and I love that.

In this chapter, you introduced the dream as a means to bypass some arising consistency problems. So far, this is fine when you want to avoid certain topics like excrements, but please don't use it to cover loopholes in the story. Right now, you are implementing more and more of the light bondage theme, but I myself would love to see more of the mind controlattitude alteration explored.