The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Maurice Blue
Xtreme Wrestling
Jackie takes a growth formula prior to stepping into the ring.
Average Scores:

Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

boring,too short, didn't go far enough with the BE ended when things were getting good

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