Peter has a problem : he is... shrinking. How is it even possible? And why is his sister and her friends suddenly growing?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 3.83
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.67
flies
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Flamewrks
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The poorly thought out ending slightly ruined it for me. Hopefully the author is back on form for the next entry.
Needle7
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A Master in your craft. No two stories ever feel to similar. Thanks for writing ajother great one.
Stonecorner
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As always a great Wolof story! The only complaint is that its not long enough, but leaves room for a sequel!
Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The Docter
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed this one Wokod, could have used a little more on the descriptive side as far as the BE is concerned, or even just spent a little more time with each individual character, but overall it was still really enjoyable.
I really hope to see a part 2 where Peter gets his wish. Being that I am a personal fan of unaware growth I would love to see his wish realized in perhaps a manner only he and the three girls are aware of this time.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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