The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Xenoplasm Book 1
Aliens transform one girl and make her torment her companion - a ""choose your own adventure"" story with lots of weird transforms.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Weird but good. Could have used more BE description than "big as X" but the writing itself was solid.

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