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The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
Spider Bites
Long-lost Steve Palmer story finally posted!!! An explorer trekking through the rain forest witnesses a female tribe's coming-of-age ritual utilizing an exotic spider, then brings it back with him to share with a female college.

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Sorry, I meant to say colleague in the description. Didn't mean to get anyone needlessly excited. Anyway, hope you enjoy!
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