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The Overflowing Bra

BEengineer
All Puffed Up Part 1
An aquarium worker has an unfortunate encounter with a blowfish and finds she can't handle stress quite the same after.
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 I Think
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5 
I'd love to see more of this, the semivoluntary growth is really interesting to read!
 Svin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Good! Please continue.
 Kayla Decay
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Keep this cute lil series going! While air inflation isnt my preference, its done very well. The protagonist is adorable, the premise excitingly full of simple potential, the grammar quite fine. Cant wait to see how far you can take this!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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