Kendra uses her second wish and gives Mike a boost. Includes Parts 1 & 2
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 2.00
- Technical: 4.00
WildCard
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
I'm not a big fan of short story's or short chapter in general, typically these short stories lack a decent description and feel some what rushed on the overal flow of the story.
Having read all 3 parts in one go, the story is progressing at a very rapid pace. However I'm surprised to say I'm enjoying the story. Writing short enjoyable stories is an art of it's own.
Looking forward to the next part or parts
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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