Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. I see you there. Today for your viewing pleasure is the story of a mischievous little voyeur, not content anymore with the shows she peeps. She'll come to see though that getting more has a heavy price.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Guest
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Vivi
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Overall, a very good read. Lots of sex, but always accompanied with BE that's portrayed rather well. The ending is pretty dark, but it's easy enough to avoid if that's not your thing.
The story follows a voyeur who doesn't participate in any action it's an interesting take on the usual formula that is done very well.
There are a number of typos seems to be autocorrect picking the wrong words that do distract from the story. With a quick proofread from the author, this is easily a 4.55 story overall.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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