They know your wishes without needing to say.
You've wished for someone to whisk you away.
That's what happens when you come to play.
At our most fabulous, Perverse Cabaret.
Invited on a Blind Date, one man's inner most desires will be unleashed.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 3.67
- Technical: 4.00
Russian Judge
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Interesting concept...but. The protagonist was just a bundle of cliches, and his dominator was one big cliche. I couldn't relate to either. And the mechanism of the Cabaret was out of a kiddie story. Next time, think what a man would feel like to become a woman mentally as well as physically.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Giving all 5s to even out the from the Dbag that didn't even write a review. That being said, I had trouble getting through the beginning but once it started going I really enjoyed this, and the concept, I'd love to see more!
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Thank goodness the whole thing isn't in rhyming couplets. It's a pretty standard TG story unhappy man turned into compliant, busty, pregnant woman. A few grammatical nits push technical quality down, and there's a herd of cliches in there that could stand to be thinned out. Too much setup and exposition about the club itself it's a magical nightclub, we're all familiar with the trope by now.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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