The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
His Dream Girl
Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. Today we have the tale of a young couple looking to spice things up and take them to the next level. They may come to learn much more than expected about each other in the process.
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Would love a sequel with details about what her new user uses the app for. Or what happens to him should he try to gain access again.

Love the overall concept. 
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