The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

New Type Part 1
A girl discovers her ability to take the breasts of others.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great job keep going
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good quality writing, no spelling and typographical errors as far as could see. I like the premise, but some parts seem a bit rushed in terms of the pacing. Personally, I would have liked a bit more focus on the breast descriptsion growth, play, etc.. Nevertheless, a great first contribution and I look forward to the next instalment. 
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