The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Madam Materia
Perfect for Each Other
Welcome to Madam Materia's Magical Menagerie. For your fancy today, I suggest this story of a young girl, Sam, and her overwhelming desire to win the heart of her best friend Kassie. Though she may learn the exact cost and consequences might be bigger than she thinks.
Average Scores:

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Any chance you could add a non.docx version to your uploads?  A lot of these sound neat but I can't view them...
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Hmm touchy starting it in a school, but enjoyable overall.
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Not a bad story, but with a bit of a bummer ending which can be it's own kind of fun. 
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Welcome to the site! Loved the story, would be keen to see what else you've got
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Pretty good stuff. Wanted more BE, may have been more fun if both girls experienced it.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Best new story I've read on here in a long time
Dont be a b
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What's with these trash comments every time someone posts a new story?
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please be less pretentious.
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BE Description (Detail, quantity, quality)
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Characters (Descriptions, likeability)
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Technical Quality (Writing style, grammar, etc.)
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