The Overflowing Bra

Hey, a great story. Could have used more descriptions on the breasts and the pregnant belly for that matter but this was a thoroughly enjoyable read. I'm not sure how to rate the first personsecond person perspective. It's not bad by any means and worked fairly well when information was kept a bit vague. But combined with Madelaine and Abby, there's a bit of a jarring sense in being knocked out of the protagonist's point of view.
Madelaine however was a freakin' beast of a character, very lovely, great personality and I'd stand to read a dozen stories more with the character. Seriously, you could do no wrong by expanding upon this idea. Keep writing! More of her, more content, more descriptions. All of that will come naturally with more practice. Eat up the positivity and keep cranking out stories. I'll definitely read the next thing you write. Keep it up!

It's was an interesting read, overall decent and the first person perspective was an interesting take on it, even through it had me reread lines over again, for they caused some confusion, simply due to not being used to be reading from a first person perspective.

There was breast expansion, but it was bit lust lacking.

As the story progressed, things felt a bit more hurried on making the ending a bit weird and unexpected.


Shift focus a bit more to BE and Character interaction with one another and adding more padding to the overal story and it would have been a lot better, a specially if the ending was a but more fleshed out.

Decent, although more of a pregnancy story than a breastexpansion one.