May is a high school senior who has been feeling strange lately. Little does she know that she will soon encounter magic powers beyond her wildest dreams! This is my first attempt at writing a BE story with a solid story structure.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Eragon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing story, please keep writing. Id love to see more of May in the near future
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked the story! Thanks and keep writing!
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Can't wait for the next installment!
Anono
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
anono
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fyona
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent! Mays excitement over her new powers was great.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yuuup. Hot, tidily written, and left me wanting more!
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