Liam found a magic wand in a well-known shop. It can do anything. What about showing it to his best friend Dave and change Dave's little sister, Kitty, to make things funnier?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.70
Stonecorner
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This story is great! I hope we see some more stories soon. It seems this website is being abandoned so maybe you could submit stories on deviantart or something. Hope all is well and youre still writing at the very least, Wokod
Oz
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Loved the sting in the tail!
WildCards
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Really enjoyed it especially as things gradually spiraled out of control. Even though i'm no fan of GTS, using the wand with the incorrect words, added a nice twist.
The end was a bit, Meh! Didn't really like it but, compared to the rest of the story it's only a small thing.
Great story Wokod, thanks
Nick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Masterful story telling. Ending was funny and definitely caught me off guard.
RedGhost
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I quite enjoyed this story for what it was. The main characters got enough background so you knew what was going on and the secondary characters were just window dressing, but the scene was set well and the transformations were described in good detail too. Knowing the preferences of Wokod's writings to date, I did not have any problems with the growth variations that were included to work around the problems encountered by the protagonist even if they were selfinduced through conservative morals as it was something new in a Wokod story. The way that it ends might seem disappointing, but there is enough of an escape clause there for a sequel to be written in the future. Overall good job.
Olly69
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked your story very much but not the end.
Also her growth to 8 feet and more wasn't necessary.
What I really missed was the introduction of Amanda's sister to Dave and maybe even that the girls like the cum which arrived on their bodies, that could have become addicted to it.
Please continue the good work.
Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Marvelous ! Happy new year !
khahahaa
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is the twist. no one will be able to stop her growth. very good.
Rakki
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
JohnDoe1974
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
WOW!!!! Awesome story!!!
The only thing that doesnt work for me was the high grow, but it was not so important.
Please go on!!!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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