The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Warm Squeeze
Kimberly is a pale short chemist and materials scientist who is tasked with discovering a new substance for heat insulation. Her company needs this thick gel material for a top secret engineering project. She has found a suitable candidate and to her surprise, the gel can make very realistic breast implants. But how long can she keep it secret from her aggressive and superficial boss Holly?
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Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Found this one to be a bit incomprehensible to read, 0 development of characters, and with a violent ending that wasn't really warned for.
Overall= 1, BE= 4, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
f'd up ending. terrible.
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The story could be a little longer. I liked many of the items but would have liked it more if there was more BE. Good first effort  keep writing.  
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