At the height of the Roman Empire, Venus, the Goddess of Love, decides which women will become beautiful and which will be ugly. It is said that when puberty comes, she personally blesses every woman's bust.
One priestess of Venus feels very blessed indeed.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 5.00
BoobityBoob
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
While the actual description of the growth was limited, I loved the story as a whole and am looking forwards to see whats next
anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Only complaint is that there's no 'o' in 'sextuplets'.
Some guy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A really excellent little story
ExPFCWintergreen
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A masterclass in the form. Mathematically, creatively, technically perfect execution, like the spiral shape of a snail shell. It's short, but it puts 10,000 words of story arc into a compact delivery system. Instant. Classic.
blueberrysolo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
amazing story! especially the struggle of Aquila and Marcella forcing her milk. Please write more in the same style!!
deuxanges
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is very good! An interesting plot and background, narrative flows smoothly and the pace was about right for me. No typos as far as I can see. My only minor criticism is that it would have been nice to have a bit more descriptions of BE and growing bellies, but otherwise it was good. Would love to read a sequel.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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