The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

hrambard
Wild Fling
After a murky night, a woman wakes to some strange feelings. A rather short story.
Average Scores:
 BB47
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
Short story contest entry of some sort.  2minute read.  No sex, a tiny bit of expansion, and done.  Technically ok.
 Darkheart
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Short, sweet, to the point and seriously hot. I hope we see more from you in the future.
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