The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Commission: Spring Blooms
Two roommates spending Spring Break on campus run into a little trouble after one of them uses her chemistry skills to fulfill her friend's wishes of being bustier and shorter.
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Overall= 3, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Lots of fun expansion.  Light and quick reading.  No sex, no guy character.  Fairly short.  
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