The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Steve Palmer
A Wizard_s Tale (Illustrated!)
A fair maiden, unsatisfied with her breast size, visits a manipulative wizard. We all know what happens next!
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Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Are there Illustrations or was that a typo?
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This was in one of his printed story collections in an annoying Olde English font.  It's a pretty good story, although not his best.
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
Seems to be an early Steve Palmer story that I've never seen before... Not the greatest, but still a worthy story.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved it
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