Find out what happens when a man given all the power to print his dreams into reality is left alone with his horny office crush!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.33
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.17
Colin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really like this story could you please continue this storyline? With some amazongiantess growth and maybe Harry finds out he can change himself too. Possibilities are endless.
HomacidalWolf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
This was a good ending to the basically cliffhanger ending of the first part. Keep it up.
Rand All
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fantastic. It's my own perfect fantasy. Please, carry on!
Blargenofram
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I really like the premise of the story and the characters definitely need to do more here!
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Good story, good sequel. My only complaintsuggestion. He has this printer that can do anything, and so far all it has been is fuckin this girl. He has barely even tried to test this power. He should see how far it can go.
Nick Tammer
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Hi, I really enjoyed the first part. But in the second part you were going overhasty through her changing. It's like you invite a girl to a candlelight dinner, you go dancing, you offer her a massage and then, when it comes to it, you blow your load in two seconds.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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