The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Bitch Ring
A rich, bitchy but aging housewife misses the days when she was just a bitch having fun. Maybe HellMart can help.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Superb  I'm a sucker for realitywarpingmemory alteration, and its use here is just amazing.
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really fun concept and transformations. I love a story that surprises even when the concept is clearly laid out from the start.
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Well, her being bitchy is kinda the point of the story, but that was pretty much overkill IMO
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm going to give you all 5's because i loved this.  I woke up this morning and was bored and now... wow... not bored.  the technical errors are definately forgivable and .... especially by me since i make a lot of mistakes too.   ha ha.

Your writing has improved a LOT.
She really is a bitch... ha ha.

I hope you keep writing and writing and writing.....
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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