A rich, bitchy but aging housewife misses the days when she was just a bitch having fun. Maybe HellMart can help.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.20
- Technical: 4.60
ALloyd
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Superb I'm a sucker for realitywarpingmemory alteration, and its use here is just amazing.
rino
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Really fun concept and transformations. I love a story that surprises even when the concept is clearly laid out from the start.
xyzxyzxyz
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 4
Well, her being bitchy is kinda the point of the story, but that was pretty much overkill IMO
artribus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I'm going to give you all 5's because i loved this. I woke up this morning and was bored and now... wow... not bored. the technical errors are definately forgivable and .... especially by me since i make a lot of mistakes too. ha ha.
Your writing has improved a LOT.
She really is a bitch... ha ha.
I hope you keep writing and writing and writing.....
Bgger
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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