What would you do if you had a crush on a co-worker and a printer that made whatever you printed a reality?
Plenty of sexy fun and expanding tits, of course!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.60
- BE: 3.40
- Characters: 4.40
- Technical: 4.50
Spat
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Rand All
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I would REALLY love to read more of this....
BoobityBoob
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I only gave the BE score a 3 due to the limited amount but that was a great story. Hot, interesting and ending on a cliffhanger. Cant wait for part 2.
heavyd
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
really looking forward to chapter 2. please keep writing! would love to see super detailed descriptions of her breasts expanding as well as her thought process while they're growing. gradual increases and multiple chapters! i would love for this one to last for a while.
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Yup, hot and teasing, and I'm excited for more!
Triqz
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
A little light on the BE for this one. But, I really liked this as an intro story and look forward to where this goes!
wildcard
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A very weird story, fun and amusing nonetheless, just can't put much logic in to the printer or the program used to fix it.
Even though it's the printer or the program used to fix it it very much feels like this story is part of the Master PC Universe.
Very little BE, what took place happened at the end, ending with a big cliff hanger, leaving readers guessing what's next to come
aitchbee
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Reminiscent of Stephen King's story Word Processor of the Gods.
Kngithwolf1875
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I think Harry should take the printer home for some weekend fun. The boss did say they could be in late Monday.
Catfish
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very interesting method of reality alteration. Definitely looking forward to more!
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