During excursion to the mall Tamara was transformed by the Ring of Expectation from a nerdy girl into a vampire-looking bombshell and she started a loving relationship with her sports-obsessed friend Amy. Today they decided that Amy should try out the ring too. But its powers are random and unreliable the girls can’t even imagine the degree of that weirdness yet.
(All previous disclaimers still apply.)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 4.00
wazah0
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Nice but a bit too short.
Keep Going
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Overall very enjoyable! I really like your style. I know you're aware but if you sharpen your grammar and syntax you'd be unstoppable.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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