(This is more of a writing experiment: I randomly chose a list of transformations (there is BE but it’s not the point), their durations and then strung together scenes based on them. So “the story” is rather disjointed.)
Tamara is a college student, a nerdy young woman with thick glasses, no curves to speak of and mostly wearing shapeless clothing. Today she goes to the mall with a new piece of jewelry: an antique ring she found in old unopened letter from her grandmother with promise that it will change her life. This is the Ring of Expectations, it magically tries to project on its wearer qualities over people find most attractive but the ring is not too strong and works somewhat randomly.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.71
- BE: 4.29
- Characters: 4.43
- Technical: 4.14
Sowega
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Grammar aside, I think this was a fantastic story! I love that you included other elements of her becoming sexy beyond just breast and ass expansion. It was fantastically hot! It actually reminds me of one of my all time favorite stories by The Martian called 'Blessing of Aphrodite'. Definitely worth a read if you haven't already. I swe he also commented and liked your story. Good job!
Whitewolf
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Amazing story. Will you write next chapter about Amy? It would be great if she would become much more curvy than her girlfriend.
Marvolo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Pretty good for a 'writing experiment'! Reminds me of The Blessing of Apollo which is a good thing.
Bubs
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The transformations were fun, and I liked some of the gothy angle. There wasn't enough breast growth in this one, though. I would have liked to see them grow more than she wanted them to.
MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
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I just downloaded and opened this on my phone.
TruePain
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I can't get it to open it says its damaged
The Martian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Despite what the description says, this was a well thought out and well executed story. Having the main character change in such a way that even once she figures it out there's not much she can do to stop becoming more beautiful is one of my favourite types so I enjoyed this a lot and I hope you keep writing!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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