Michael finds himself in a hospital of shifters. Perhaps he'll find out why Jessica was acting the way she was on the mountant, with her mountants. And let's not forget if there is one shifter about, most likely a dozen lurking around waiting. (Includes the prelude) Remember if you like, hate, or want to say something leave a comment!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.00
Scalewolf
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I really like the story. The character developement is very well paced. The overall narrative fits perfectly into the overall Shifters feel.
The problems I do see are more on the technical side.
SD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Cant wait for the next chapter
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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