The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Yes, Mistress
A man, unsatisfied with his body, comes to a woman named the sorceress in the hopes of getting the body he desires. She gives him all he ever wanted, and so much more.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good story. Reads like more. Like to see how he works it with regular people.
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Short, sexy, rushed, futa, empty.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This had such great promise and may yet, but just not into dick girls.
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