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The Millipede Bugs the Astronaut
A stranded astronaut has fun with giant alien insects. Major preggo and BE.
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A bit confusing since I read part 2 first. Otherwise a good read. I liked the plot and the different POVs. I enjoyed Znxxx and how it was just an honest experiment. His reactions are great.
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