The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Preve
Big Honkin' Slugs
Two hot naked women and an island of giant mutant slugs. Slime, preggo, and a little BE. Simple as that.
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Honesty fan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
You know it's bad form to praise your own stories.
Preve Fan
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Keep on keeping on.  Those familiar with Preve's works will know what to expect. It's quality writing if it's otherwise to your tastes.
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