The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Mighty Lingster
Unknown
Will's Power
A teenage boy discovers the power to cause women to grow hugely muscular and bosomy.
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 flies
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
an amazing classic.
 Senor Sol
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Good
 billy bob jole
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
could of had a little more BE Overall very good 
 Yates
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
One of the best combinations of be and fmg around!
 anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4 
good stuff
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