The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

The Bellows
The daughter of a blacksmith finds herself captivated by the bellows she works with everyday and finally gets her chance to experiment.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Cute.  Simple.  Short.
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great! A solid short.
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
An awesome short! Very well written and interesting despite being a little short D
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