Mark, a postgraduate biologist, uses his knowledge of newly developed bio-chemistry to give an unsuspecting friend "a little boost" in sexual appeal. Will Mark take it too far? Mark intends to take it too far.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.50
- Technical: 4.50
ZS
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Short and to the point I enjoyed your writing and descriptions, though I agree this is not a fully fleshed tale, but it was fun. I hope to see more from you in the future.
Daichi
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Focus on describing the expansions a bit more rather than just doing a time jump as that leaves much to be desired for fleshing out characters in how they are reacting and try to cope with the changes that were occuring
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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