Another commission! After a woman uses a bit of lotion, she finds herself growing in ways like never before. Lucky break for her roommate who has always had a crush on her. Contains breast, butt, and belly expansion.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
Fahzbehn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Couple of small grammatical errors and the changing of perspective was a little jarring. The make character is a wimp, but otherwise a good story.
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thank you for this. This is a good straight to the point story that this site's been lacking of late.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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