The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Commission: Growing Closer
Another commission! After a woman uses a bit of lotion, she finds herself growing in ways like never before. Lucky break for her roommate who has always had a crush on her. Contains breast, butt, and belly expansion.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Couple of small grammatical errors and the changing of perspective was a little jarring.  The make character is a wimp, but otherwise a good story.
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thank you for this. This is a good straight to the point story that this site's been lacking of late. 
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