Tomo is from Japanese origins. She just wishes Japanese girls were bigger. She gets her wish. And a lot more.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.33
- Technical: 4.67
namrego
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Nice story, with several interesting twists Wokod you're impressively prolific and imaginative!
codexdrinker
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great job! I like the reality shifting nature of the story.
Boris
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Some guy
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
A pretty good story. Personally like KJ I'm a fan of bigger boobs and without the giantess stuff
KJ
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I like the premise of the story. For an ESL you get yoru point across really well. The technical issue isn't a big deal for me.
I'm not a fan of Giant and if you have put more growth in boobs then this would have worked for me.
I hope you keep writing .
Oik
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
I usually like all tour stories I'm a fan of 'the dictaphone' but 'Japan Superior' was a bit different It doesnt feel closed to the main characters. Anyway I like your stories, keep the good world!
I'm not a native english speaker, sorry for muy spell mistakes.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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