Two teenagers have a pair of magical wristbands allowing them to change each other. What could go wrowng?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.50
- Characters: 4.25
- Technical: 4.25
BB47
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Hot! Sexy! Yet another Deus ex machina though. Seems you have a penchant for this type of ending.
Grower
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
OK, that was awesome. As noted below, straight male growth stories are rare gems, especially when coupled with awesome female growth.
My only complaint was the darkness, but that's also what makes a good story, as opposed to good porn.
Roid Abuser
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Very, very, hot.
I love when both male and female become overly sexual. When authors leave that out in a body modification tale, they're leaving 50 of the kink on the table. Straight male growth stories are also exceptionally rare.
I must admit I read these stories for more base animalistic purposes than reading a good tale, but you're a good writer with clever ideas and morals on top of writing a great wank story. Bit like a porno version of Black Mirror or Twilight Zone.
Very enjoyable. I encourage everyone to read.
Anon
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked your previous story more since it was more humorous and happy. You did a good job depicting the tragedy of Tiny Tina and her childhood friend, but I wasn't able to invest myself after they inadvertently turned themselves into jerks.
Noticed that you did the 'hairs' when you should have written 'hair'. Guess it's a habit that'll take a while to overcome in your English stories, but you're getting better. Don't give up!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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