The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

A short story, and a little different, since a few readers wanted a story involving animal traits. So... three friends can pick their animal totem. What will they choose?
Average Scores:

Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Congratulations on keeping up with such incredibly prolific pace.

The visual picture you painted of the three heroines was quite vivid in my mind. You make it look easy.

Keep up the good work!

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